JUNE 19, 2007
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“Roriana: Little Anal Collection” by Moku Ujiie.
An Akiba-Online project headed by Chompy. So far, I have edited 4 chapters plus a bonus story. Chompy became disinterested about continuing with the project, but I got his permission to complete the project, solo. (See Blog Post for more info.) |
The following “Roriana” stories were the ones I worked on thus far.
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“An Allowance Advisory”
My first story for Akiba Online. Originally, this story was “loosely” translated by someone else… no credits were given, so I would assume “Anonymous.” I say “loosely” ‘coz there were errors here and there, including the title. So I ended up re-translating it. |
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“Oni-ichan”
“Oni” in this case means “demon” or “ogre.” The second story I worked on. I did minor changes to the translation. Short and gloomy, IMHO. |
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“Sukisuki Sensei”
Now this story was more my speed! Cute, erotic, with a funny ending! Unlike “Oni-ichan,” this story went through a bit more re-translating. |
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“Akogare no Hito” (The Person Of Longing)
This one I ended up chucking the script and starting from scratch, much like “An Allowance Advisory.” Moku Ujiie’s style is a bit different here compared to some of the other chapters. He could have continued to flesh out the characters and story a bit more in continuing chapters… IMHO. |
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“Su-pa- Sentou” (Super Public Bath)
A short, uber-cute story… if your into uber-cuteness… ’bout an uber-bath with magical uber-lolis! Okay, maybe they’re not uber-lolis, but the do seem somewhat magical! |
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