Muv-Luv Alternative – Volume 2, Chapter 11 and Volume 3, Chapter 17

CH11: Tama Papa/The Axis of Change

In this Chapter, Takeru relives meeting the U.N. Undersecretary begins to face an unknown future.

This is a fairly long chapter. There’s also an extended scene with Sakaki, which wasn’t shown in Unlimited, which really clarified the context of the dialog a lot for me. In fact, because a lot of things in this chapter provided much clarity and a different perspective, and because my knowledge of the Japanese language is ever evolving and (hopefully) improving, that I may go back and revise parts of Unlimited…if and when I have time.

On a production note: Prior to proofreading this and chapter 17 myself, I gave Acroray (who I consider a friend from abroad and the Muv-Luv franchise’s biggest fan ever! lol) a preview. A couple of emails later and prior to his acceptance, I decided to credit him as “Proofreader.” So, I would like y’all to please welcome Acroray as “Proofreader” for Chapters 11 and 17.

Please note, however, Acroray hasn’t had a chance to proof this final version; because, as ever usual, I had some down to the wire, last second changes. ^_^;;

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CH17: Captain Sagiri/Reflection and Resolve

In this chapter, Takeru reflects on his Original World and the Other World. Plus, more sub-plots with the introduction of Captain Naoya Sagiri, whom we got a glimpse of at the end of Chapter 16. And will the question of why Kasami collapses after an experiment ever be answered?!?

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